Please enjoy “The First Love”, my flash fiction piece published today at the Pittsburgh Flash Fiction Gazette. Several of my stories have appeared in the Gazette in the past, so take a look around while you’re there. It’s all free!
I never expected to hear his voice. Not there, not then. If I was asked, I would have chosen some far flung beach for our reunion. Sarongs and sunsets. Or perhaps a friend’s wedding where we would have smiled and whispered about old times. But fate had other ideas. The little coffee…
via Flash Fiction: The First Love by Nicci Haydon — PittsburghFlash
This is very very sexy.
I love the speed. I love the sex.
I mostly love the ending.
I’m glad it gave you a moment of sexiness in a tough day!
I loved the ending too, it just seemed right, somehow. Slightly melancholy, but perfect for her character.
you are very good, actually.
Thank you, you’re always so kind to me!