“I’d love to be inside your mind when you’re writing something like that.”
– a reader who would prefer to remain anonymous
Thank you, thank you, thank you! A thousand times thank you! Surely there can be no greater compliment than being told that your mind is a strange and foreign land.
Well, not for a writer anyway.
Anal Adoration tells the story of a rich and privileged woman’s indulgence in a bit of anonymous sex, with a bit of kink and a chunk of anal play thrown in (as suggested by the title).
The unnamed narrator has fled from her home in search of a rough diamond who’ll satisfy her in ways that she’s been dreaming about, leaving behind her husband and kids as she takes care of number one for a few days.
The action of the story mainly takes place in a hotel room, where she’s pleasured by a random trucker that she enticed into her game.
My first thought on seeing Saskia was, “Oh my god, I’m going to cum.” My second thought was, “She looks rich and glamorous.”
Characters and Plot
I’ve written before about using contrast to add tension. This story offers a bit of a smorgasbord. The unnamed woman, played by Saskia in the accompanying video, is from a privileged background, while her anonymous trucker (played by Edward) is the perfect bit of rough: sexy, hot and ordinary.
More than that, both characters are internally contrasted. We don’t expect rich, well-to-do ladies to run off in search of rough sex. Anal play and whips with a stranger are certainly not in the stereotype. Nor do we expect some of the tenderness we get from the trucker – a willingness to please and plenty of foreplay.
I’ll admit, I had help on this one. As the writer, I had access to the pre-production stills from the film. My first thought on seeing Saskia was, “Oh my god, I’m going to cum.” My second thought was, “She looks rich and glamorous.” I went with thought number two for her character.
As for Edward, he’s hot. Smoking hot. Definitely my type (they were spoiling me). Torn jeans, rough around the edges. I thought at first that he might be a biker, but he didn’t look quite rough enough for that, so I settled on a trucker.
As is almost always the case, the story grew up out of the characters. The important thing is that something happens as a result of the events in the story. In this case, Saskia’s character is out to satisfy her burning sexual needs – but how this indulgence affects her is something that you’ll have to read the story to find out.
What did you like? What didn’t you like?
It all helps me to make sure I’m giving my readers what they want!